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Feature Story : International Student Workers Rights Need Protection

International Student Workers Rights Need Protection

        When a foreign student comes over to Australia on a student visa, he does so with high hopes and expectations about his host country. As his host, it is Australia’s job to insure that he gets the highest caliber of education available in the world, and that he is treated properly as a visitor in a strange land. For some strange reason though, Australian hospitality seems to fall through the cracks once these visitors temporarily join the workforce. It isn’t our fault that the cost of living in their country is a lot higher than the allowance that our family sends to us from overseas. Not all of the international students really need to work while studying here but do so in order to experience the kind of social exposure that we would not normally get as an ordinary student. Which is why as employers, Australians should not overstep their bounds and abuse us as guests. But that seems to be exactly what is happening to our lot.

Everybody knows that the minimum hourly wage in Australia is $15 per hour. That is a government mandate that does not discriminate in terms of race, gender, sex, sexual orientation, or status of employment. In other words, foreign students are not exempted from workers rights. The laws that apply to ordinary Australian citizens applies to us as well, no exceptions. However, not all of the foreign students working in the student communities are well versed in terms of their rights as employees.

Take for example the case of Mr.Keng, a university student, who has been studying and working part time at a Chinese restaurant. The kitchen has been his work area for the past 2 years where he washes dishes, helps prepare minor dishes, and doubles as a busboy during rush hours. He gets paid $9 an hour without tax deductions. I caught up with him after his work shift at a local coffee shop and asked him to tell me his story. And his tale, left me feeling sad at the plight that some foreign students working part-time in Australia face.

“I have to be honest with you. When I started working at the restaurant 2 years ago, I did not know anything about my rights as worker. They paid me $6 an hour during my training period that lasted one month and then increased my salary to $9 a hour when I passed the training period. I had no idea about what the minimum hourly salary rate was at the time and did not even know that I was covered by the country’s regular employment laws.  I was just so happy to be working and learning about the work environment in Australia.”

It seems that some unscrupulous employers have decided to take advantage of the eagerness of international students to integrate into the social landscape. So they have decided to arbitrarily enforce their own employment laws. Keng  is not the first employee at the restaurant who was duped by the owner of the venue. We were later  joined by his childhood friend and current roommate Mr.Kim who further enlightened me on the trials that they face.

“Keng is lucky to have been paid $9 an hour. I work at a Thai restaurant and I get paid $8 an hour. We both know that we are severely underpaid but don’t complain because it is very difficult for non Australians to find a job here. I was once rejected for a job as a barista at a coffee bar because they wanted somebody who was white and spoke English clearly.”

According to Keng and Kim, they have both tried to find higher paying jobs in the area but have not found any employers who were willing to pay them regular salary rates. Both of them are wondering if they will see the day when foreign students working in Australia will finally be paid the proper minimum wage, whatever it might be by that time.

Being casual employees, visiting students generally work a preset number of hours each week, usually only half the time that regular employees are expected to punch in at work. Generally, the part time employees have the same worker’s rights as the regular employees (based upon hours worked instead of days of work) and most of these employers stick to the rules as it applies to the part time native Australian student / employee. However,  employers have decided to apply the employment laws arbitrarily in relation to international working students.

Since international students enter the workforce without any idea of what to expect in terms of treatment and salary, the tendency is to accept whatever offer is set on the table for us. Thinking that everything is on the level and that is how business in Australia is done.

Mr. Sawarut, a 29 year old Thai who has been an international student with casual worker status for the past 2 years has been working at the local Thai restaurant for $8.50 an hour in order to support himself to cover his food and housing. We all know the financial difficulties faced by regular Australians with regular employment, imagine how that can translate into triple fold for visiting students like us. That is exactly why international students should be considered the unsung heroes of the Australian economy and therefore, should be treated fairly as well. We repay our Australian hosts for the hospitality bestowed upon us by being of service to them whenever we can.

Sawarut explains that the reason he is still working at the Thai restaurant even though he knows that he is getting the bum end of the stick is because ” I can speak in my native tongue (Thai). I get to spend some time everyday with people from Thailand and that helps ease my home sickness pangs. More importantly, they may pay me only $8.50 an hour but they allow me to eat two meals, usually lunch and dinner, at the restaurant, and take home some food at the end of the day, all for free. So I figured that they may be paying me less than minimum wage but it all evens out at the end.”

He continues to explain that almost all foreign students working part time in Melbourne are paid less than minimum wage but they are all fine with it. But if he can get paid 15$ per hour, based upon minimum wage regulation , he will very happy.

It appears that most employers view international student workers as casual instead of part time or regular members of their work force because as students, we cannot guarantee the number of hours that we will be working on a monthly, weekly, or daily basis. Which is why part time and international student workers are not entitled to paid sick leave or annual leave. Normally though, casual workers get paid a lot more money because of these conditions. In other words, what the employee cannot have in terms of benefits, should be translated into financial benefits instead. This is something that international working students need as an employment benefit most of all.

By this point, it had become clear to me that our sector of working students have never been told of our rights as workers in Australia, and nobody was about to take up the cudgels for us in order to try and get us a fair shake employment wise.

I met with Ja Tilkanont a Master Student from Monash University. He said that when he first came to Australia, he did not expect to be unfairly treated since he had heard a lot about how special Australian hospitality was. Instead, during his time of need, he learned all about how Australian employers just wanted to keep putting one over him in every way they could. Which is why he had this piece of advice for other international students seeking to work casually in Australia; ” Don’t be so excited about working and earning your own money that you accept the first job offer that comes along. If you are offered $300 a month as salary at any job, do not take the offer. Consider how much you have to pay for your housing, transportation, and food, and you will realize how you are being shortchanged by that employer. Demand that they pay you $15 an hour or walk away. We are hard working students who need some help in order to complete our education. There are laws in place to protect us, demand that the laws be followed or report them to the government.”

Mr.Ja is right. These shady employers will continue to abuse our rights as international student workers for as long as we allow them to do so. That has to be stopped for the sake of the future incoming international students. Australians are fair and just people. They are not discriminatory, nor do they take advantage of the less fortunate. It is time that their image as selfish and abusive employers changes in the eyes of the international student community. All we ask as casual workers is that we be given our just dues. After all, our work helps bolster Australia’s image to the world just like any other Australian.

As international students working part time or even full time in a foreign land, we tend to blame our employers for any maltreatment that we may be receiving without realizing that we are actually the ones causing our own problems. Very rarely will an international student try to find out about his workers rights because he is either too busy to do so or does not have a very good grasp of the English language so he has no idea what kind of work deal he is getting into. We have to take responsibility for our own actions and shortcomings as employees as well. We must be aware of the fact that if we allow our employer to disregard Australian labor laws, we will suffer the most because we could be deported for allowing the employer to cheat on his taxes or some other violations that are sure to come to light once we, together with the employer are finally caught. Don’t risk the status of your student visa. Don’t be a party to a citizen cheating his government out of rightful tax collection. Demand respect from your employer by demanding he pay the proper wages. The Australian labor code can only protect us so much. It is up to us as employees, to use the existing labor laws to our advantage and utmost protection. We can only do that by becoming labor law literate employees and that is not hard to do here in Australia. All the labor information that one needs is actually at his fingertips.

For more information about International Student Workplace Rights, visit the Australian Government Workplace Ombudsman on the web at http://www.fairwork.gov.au. The website contains various helpful and informative links of interest to international students who are thinking of working casually while they study here. The Workplace Ombudsman Helpline number is 1300 724 200. While letters of concern can be sent via postal mail to the Workplace Ombudsman at GPO Box 9887 in your capital city.

 
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Posted by on May 29, 2011 in Uncategorized

 

The Power of Words

Change your words , change your world

just want to share this :D

 
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Posted by on May 22, 2011 in Uncategorized

 

Week 11 reading

The expose makes me feel like folding it up and giving up on reading as the exhilarating nervousness kills me but cannot stop until I finish. I want to know how the bad things end and if they could end up being good things. The authors have made sure that the reader gets tormented but prevents him from giving up. Suspense is just what the doctor ordered.

In “death by buffet” I first get confused on what is going on since there is the journalist anchoring, talking less about the war since the pictures say it all and there is the one used to being in radio but loves watching. I make my own conclusion that her interest in watching makes her want to work for television agencies which she does eventually. I get the news setting that make her keep asking “is this journalism” and feel relaxed as she makes me realize am reading and not in the situation. It is not good how easily it discourages one from a particular interest like the way Sarah feared being a journalist at the war front, wow, love life, how can I forget to say that love is in every human habitation. Gambling her career with love, Sarah gets confused on whether to go back to the loved one or undertake the challenge. I learn that challenges will always come my way.

The next one is “life stuff”. Tom Wolfe makes sure that people like me read his articles. This one in particular is perfect. Talk of suspense and I will give an answer that tom knows how to do it best. “Have you heard about it”, this makes restart reading the article again, teaching me that there are ways of breaking sad news. Jane handled her situation differently. If today I was told the same by my friend, I would ask myself the same questions that Jane asked herself “why me and did they have to talk about my husband”. I would hate the news kept for long before making them known. While reading, I felt like telling Jane that Pete was dead as the call attendant hesitated to do so, could it have been fear to break the sad news to a person with the possibilities of being the wife? I could have exactly done what he did. The expose leaves me in quagmire and I keep reading it until I take in that I am recalling the words still ahead, hence rating it as good.

When I read “Life’s in mama house”, I get interested in meeting up with ted Conover and get ideas of how he thought of writing such. How the article makes the inmates seem comfortable but having some problems edifies me that whoever is new to a place must go through hardships just like the one who took a bottle of massage oil after starving for  weeks, and parties are still being held in the same location. For example when there was a party and the cake was dropped accidentally. It is so good to read that it is my favorite article. The inmate’s story is so true that I would develop exactly what he talks about. I first thought the prison was an estate as it has many divisions called blocks. I stick it to my head that blocks are like wings.

 
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Posted by on May 21, 2011 in Uncategorized

 

Re-Write version ! – Short NEWS story assignment

E-sports competition “SOGC Iron Tournament 2011” awarded the best NSW gamers in Sydney on April, 30th

 

SOGC LAN – Iron Gamer was the gaming event conducted in Sydney on April 30th. It was a two-day tournament that started at 10.00am on April 30th and finished at 10.00pm on May 1st.  The organizers of the competition claim that the event allowed the participants to enjoy their favorite games on a whole new level. The winners of the tournament were awarded with not only the honorable title of the Iron Gamer, but also the total cash prize of $ 600, free games from Ubisoft and a free copy of the latest issue of Atomic Magazine. The winners of this tournament will participate in the National Iron Gamer competition in November.

The tournament invited the gamers from all over New South Wales, providing them with opportunities to test their strengths against the rest of the warriors to receive not only a title, but also valuable prizes and opportunities to participate in the National competition in November. The entering cost of the event was $30 which was fully compensated with the free games and Atomic Magazine issues awarded to every attendee. The gamers could form small squads up to three members or participate as solo gamers. John, one of the gamers who decided to become a member of a squad, admitted that he had no courage to compete solo against the teams consisting of three players. It was allowed to form the squads till the morning of the event in case if a gamer wanted to take part in the competition, but had difficulties with finding a team.

SOGC LAN – Iron Gamer tournament proves that e-sport as an innovative kind of sports receives a growing recognition in Australia, but its peak is awaited in the future. In other countries, the e-sports competitions are already held on amateur, semi-professional and professional levels. The tournaments and competitions are broadcasted on the television and via the Internet, and the winners are awarded with substantial money prizes. The Video Games League fosters further development of cybesports and encourages everyone who is fond of playing games to take part in the competitions. Such examples as GSL E-Sports League in Korea awarding the winner with $ 500, 000 and provides gamers with strong motivation for developing new strategies, improving their skills and participating in the tournaments.

Currently, Australian e-sport is only at its starting point and semi-professional level, but Korean gaming league has remarkable achievements. Korean attitude to cybersport is similar to that of Japanese to baseball. They have e-sports channel on television, and the largest companies, such asSamsung,SKTelecom and even the air force have their own teams for these tournaments. Ken, a Japanese pro-gamer noted: “Video games are a part of our future. If you are embarrassed of being a gamer because your friends or family assure you that video games are a mere waste of time, you should bear in mind that till you have enough moral strength to do what you like, the things which you are passionate about are not a waste of time. Moreover, gamers can make much money by participating in the tournaments. Currently, I make up to 300, 000 Japanese yen from the e-sports competitions. I recognize that my career as a professional gamer has its expiry date, but now I spend 3-5 hours a day on playing games and I am not going to give up it.”

Previously, passionate video gamers were criticized, and their hobby was considered as a waste of time, but growing recognition and popularity of cybersports prove that the situation has changed. Jiang, one of Australian students admits that with the rapid development of cybersports and the money prizes which can be gained from it, videogamer can become one of popular professions in the future.

 
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Posted by on May 18, 2011 in Uncategorized

 

Feature Practice: Jerry the oldest dog

Jerry ‘local town hero’ turns 27

Something of record breaking magnitude is about to take place in Wilcannia a small town in the western outback of New South Wales, Australia. The declining town 1000 kilometers north-west of Sydney owns one of Australia’s largest inland ports. Actually, it has the third largest. In its heyday, it was fittingly referred to as the “Queen City of the West”, but the decline has seen it struggling to cope with a population of 750 people and far less traffic along the banks of the Darling River.

The Darling River once an important feature in the Australian landscape and a bustling super highway of paddle steamers has now been reduced to a parking bay for tourist houseboats, service bay for a far-flung outback population and a constant struggle not to become ghost town.

This Sunday, the biggest event ever experienced in Wilcannia’s history is about to take place. The town’s local ‘hero’, Jerry, a red heeler-bull terrier cross, will be turning 27 years old, making him the Australia’s oldest dog alive. His status as the local town hero and his show of loyal companionship to his owners and the town folk has greatly endeared him to the locals.

His owner woody Wilson a respectable Aboriginal tribal elder is especially very fond of him. He says that he bought Jerry when he was just a puppy and he has been a guard dog for him his wife, Aileen and their three children till now. “Everyone in Wilcannia knows Jerry” says Woody. According to his owner, Jerry has been able to create a sort of identity-celebrity status-with the locals due to his fondness of people. Jerry has never hurt anyone but cats are his number one enemy.

A remarkable feature of the old codger is that he is still as vibrant as he was while still young. RSPCA vet Dr. Honey Nelson attributes his remarkable form to his maintaining a healthy diet of kangaroo, rabbit and emu meat. Jerry still shuffles along Woody and his wife on their regular bush walks and at times gets excited to a point of jumping on Woody. “He jumps up and grabs me on the arm, like he did when he was younger, but he is a bit slower and has to stop now and then for a rest” Mr. Smith said.

Dr. Nelson suggests that jerry could go on to 28 old given his good body condition. This event will certainly put Wilcannia right back on the map. The oldest known dog ever recorded according to the Guinness Book of records is an Australian cattle dog named Bluey who lived to 29 years. The small town of Wilcannia is probably eager for Jerry to surpass Bluey’s feat.

 
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Posted by on May 12, 2011 in Uncategorized

 

week10 reading

The article about Pearls Before Breakfast by Gene Weingarten was quite an intriguing and informative piece to read about. Reading the piece was quite captivating for me as a reader as felt I was reading about an issue I never gave serious concern before though it was part of my daily life. The article unveils vital and rare information about the L’ Enfant Plaza station. The writer delivers this information systematically as one can follow the information from begging to end without losing trail about what the writer is talking about. In addition, there are several characters that are vital in building the story who have been included; they include, the shoe shining lady, the cafeteria employee, the mother and son, and the pedestrians around the plaza station who are vital in building the story The piece is very well research as it gives a chronology of events that are key in developing the theme of the article, thus the writer clearly spent a lot of time on research in order to come up with these vital and accurate information. Apart from the research the article gave a deep analysis on the life of the daily commuters and pedestrians at the station, which was achieved by analyzing the characters involved and later on getting their views after the events of the day had transpired. (Weingarten np).

Also, the writer has balanced the theme of the feature by using quotes which make the story captivating to me as I feel part of the characters in the story, making this one of the best features that I have came across.

The article by Sean Gardiner over a missing black woman brings out the emotional background of the whole incident. It is able to pass on the emotions being felt by the missing woman’s mother. This is able to attract a reader to want to know why, what, when, who, where and how about the incident. Overall the article is good as it describes the whole kidnapping and subsequent actions in a friendly and albeit in a less graphic manner. The writer of this article has been able to look at the deeper issues, meanings, emotions, atmosphere, and impact of the article and take his audience on a journey to also understand what he is trying to pass on to them. (Gardiner np)

As a journalist, after reading this one is able to keep in mind what soft news entails. From the article it says these are the interesting or entertaining things about what happened and then goes on to gradually explain. Pointers to take on from this article so as to improve feature story writing skills, are such as: gradually bring out the reasons and deeper details as the story moves along; explanations should not be too graphic but written in a manner that can appeal to a wide audience. As a feature writer, one would like to pick up Gardiner’s ability to find a story, information that backs it up and telling it in an entertaining way that informs at the same time while also causing a stir in the reader to respond in a certain way. It is also vital for use of factual information all throughout the writing of the feature story; no one wants to be misled by a good story that doesn’t have any logical and true background.

 In the article we have still not lived long enough the author brings out a very emotion filled article that roses the feelings of any reader especially when he begins the feature in suspense “we should have seen this coming. We did see this coming. Yet we failed to save lives. We have still not lived long enough” (Griffiths np). In addition, the writer has balanced history, thrill and suspense as he uses words that were used by characters that existed a very long time ago, Judge Leonard. The article uses this opening remarks “we should have seen this coming. We did see this coming” in relation to the Victorian fires which were a tragic event. In addition, the feature is well researched as the writer gives accurate details as the events unfolded at the time not forgetting that he is unraveling the events in a suspense filled way making it very exiting for me as I keep on reading the piece. Further, the article has direct quotes for instance “the full story of the killing of this small community is one of unpreparedness, because of apathy and ignorance and perhaps of something worse.” To bring out the exact emotion, effect and the irony of the whole issue as the disaster would have been prevented had the community not been ignorant. In addition I find the writers use of Irony as very interesting tool in writing as it challenges a reader to reason out issues as they read on hence making the article very interactive. In addition to the feature being well researched, the writer backs the piece with well documented evidence, hence earning the credibility of its readers.

 
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Posted by on May 11, 2011 in Uncategorized

 

“NYPD In Action Over Missing Black Woman By Sean Gardiner”

The article by Sean Gardiner over a missing black woman brings out the emotional background of the whole incident. It is able to pass on the emotions being felt by the missing woman’s mother. This is able to attract a reader to want to know why, what, when, who, where and how about the incident. Overall the article is good as it describes the whole kidnapping and subsequent actions in a friendly and albeit in a less graphic manner. The writer of this article has been able to look at the deeper issues, meanings, emotions, atmosphere, and impact of the article and take his audience on a journey to also understand what he is trying to pass on to them.

As a journalist, after reading this one is able to keep in mind what soft news entails. From the article it says these are the interesting or entertaining things about what happened and then goes on to gradually explain. Pointers to take on from this article so as to improve feature story writing skills, are such as: gradually bring out the reasons and deeper details as the story moves along; explanations should not be too graphic but written in a manner that can appeal to a wide audience. As a feature writer, one would like to pick up Gardiner’s ability to find a story, information that backs it up and telling it in an entertaining way that informs at the same time while also causing a stir in the reader to respond in a certain way. It is also vital for use of factual information all throughout the writing of the feature story; no one wants to be misled by a good story that doesn’t have any logical and true background.

A feature article writer should be well conversant with the aims of a feature story, what it actually is trying to pass through to readers. A feature story needs to be entertaining but also should retain its concept to inform. Feature stories provide the writer with enough room and time to utilize language fully to go into more complex issues and demystify issues or concepts that audiences might not usually get explained.

The use of anecdotes to add more revelation and engrossment; and quotes from interviews is also a skill a journalist should utilize when writing a feature story just as in the article by Sean Gardiner. In addition, remember that the structure of the feature story should always be based on a central theme that guides the flow and development of the story. A feature story writer should have a sensible head on him to be able to think laterally and draw a synthesis on what he intends to write on. He should be able to find something new out of an old subject and at the same time localize a larger issue as done by Gardiner. Finally one should be able to ask themselves whether the information they have is able to develop the story.

A very vital component of feature and gathering of information for the article is interviews. This vital as it helps the writer to formulate his/he thoughts and come up with an appropriate significance of the story, plus developing a tone that the story would adapt. Anecdotes and quotes from an interview add more credence, and helps the writer to illustrate the major theme being passed by the writer. For the interview, the writer should get an authority in the subject matter and newsworthy because of their position, achievement, attitude or beliefs. This makes the story more credible and factual as the person(s) interviewed are associated with the events being put down one way or another Always have a checklist of what is to be done during the interview and what is the expected result of the interview. Interviews are better done face to face as this way the writer is able to establish a relationship with the interviewee. The interviewer should be attentive and listen closely to everything and also be keen to grasp any movements or expressions of the subject. Some helpful skills to have are such as use of a more conversational approach to the interview and use of observational skills to be able to get the offhand remarks or subconscious actions of the subject.  Always be alert to what is said and done.

A final thought in writing a feature is to always have developed a detailed theme. A journalist should also develop and determine their, own unique journalistic and literary signature. Having a good sense of a story that is able to be tied together in an interesting and entertaining manner with facts, tangible information and anecdotes compounded with a unique writing style; is a plus in producing an excellent feature article. One that is factual, able to stir up the readers, engrossing, entertaining and at the same time informative.

 
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Posted by on May 5, 2011 in Uncategorized

 

18 April /; in class assignment

Ackarin Virasitikul

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One killed and 20 injured in chemical lab explosion at ChemCo’s Processing plant in Tullamarine yesterday.

The incident occurred at9.45 yesterday morning in a lab of ChemCo chemical laboratories on Drawett, VIC.  The cause of the blast is being investigated. There were 200 worker on site at that time, one man has lost his life and 20 worker injured.

Thomas William,43 year olds who has been killed in the incident by direct impact of the explosion. He worked for ChemCo for 8years as chemical processor in the lab and he already married and have 2 children.

There also 20 workers who injured from this incident, but no one is in critical conditions. They had been taking to Alfred Hospital and will not return to work until the investigation complete.

The fire from explosion is now extinguish ,the situation now is safe and no risk to the resident in the area.

ChemCo External Communication Officer said that the company will do everything in its power to find out how this incident occurred and ensure that this tragedy never occur again.

 
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Posted by on April 18, 2011 in Uncategorized

 

Short NEWS Story Assignment

Let’s enjoy the game on a whole new level with “SOGC Iron Tournament 2011”. In search of the best gamers across NSW on April 30th in Sydney.

SOGC – Iron Gamer is the gaming event that will take place on April 30th in Sydney. It is a two-day tournament that will start at 10.00 am on April 30th and will finish at 10.00 pm on May 1st.  The Iron Gamer Challenge tournament is a significant event in e-sports of New South Wales. The organizers of the tournament invite the best gamers all over the region to form small squads of no more than 3 members to test their strengths against other warriors or just grieve for the success of the favorite team attending the tournament as a spectator.

Apart from winning the title of Iron Gamer which is undoubtedly honorable and desirable, the winning team will receive a cash prize of $ 600 and a lot of other goodies. Moreover, this victory will allow the squad to participate in the National Iron Gamer competition which is planned for November.

Previously, the passionate video gamers were criticized, while their hobby was regarded as a mere waste of time. However, the growing recognition and popularity of cybersports prove that the situation has changed.

E-sports or cybersports are the new terms which can sound odd to the men in the street but are well-known in the environment of video gamers. These terms are used to describe the competitions in playing video games.

Like in any other kind of sport, the E-sports competitions are held on amateur, semi-professional and professional levels. The tournaments and competitions are broadcasted on the television and via the Internet, and the winners are awarded with substantial money prizes. The Video Games League fosters further development of cybesports and encourages everyone who is fond of playing games to take part in the competitions. Such examples as GSL E-Sports League in Korea awarding the winner with $ 500, 000 provides gamers with strong motivation for developing new strategies, improving their skills and participating in the tournaments.

The recent developments in the sphere of e-sports put it alongside with more traditional sports. Moreover, the growing recognition of video gaming as a kind of sport will become a new stage of the debates concerning the impact of video games upon the players’ behavior. Ken, a Japanese pro-gamer noted: “If you are embarrassed of being a gamer because you friends or family assure you that video games are a mere waste of time, you should bear in mind that till you have enough moral strength to do what you like, the things which you are passionate about are not a waste of time”.

 
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Posted by on April 16, 2011 in Uncategorized

 

Week 7 – Class group writing exercise

Car Crashes and Burns

Hard News Story

Two people had to be rescued by police after their car crashed into a wall and exploded into flames last night.

The incident occurred about 10:30pm at the McDonalds on Richardson road in Frankston. The Subaru Impreza was estimated to be travelling at about 100km/hr as it exited the car park.

Frankston plumber Jim Allen, 23, is in a stable condition in The Alfred Hospital. He has burns on his torso and legs. The girlfriend, 23 year old Rachel Williams, was uninjured.

Two detectives nearby came to the aid of the occupants. Victorian Police Commissioner Simon Overland commended the detectives for their “fast thinking actions and bravery”.

Hard News Story (Second Draft)

Police rescued a couple from their burning vehicle after they lost control attempting a burn out in Frankston last night.

The car skidded into an embankment and burst into flames after speeding out of McDonald’s driveway in Richardson road at over 100 km/hr.

Couple Jim Allen and Rachel Williams, both 23, were pulled from the wreckage by two detectives on patrol in the area.

Allen has burns on his torso and legs and remains in a stable condition in the Alfred Hospital. Williams said “It was just a silly stunt that went too far”.

Victorian Police Commissioner Simon Overland commended the two officers for “their fast thinking actions and bravery”.

Police say that drag racing has been a problem for the last five years and is still a popular past time in Frankston.

Soft News Story

Well known for their fast food and now even more so for their fast service, Macca’s saw more red than gold over night.

Police pulled a young couple from a burning car after the driver lost control speeding out of a Frankston McDonalds.

BY Ackarin , Kevin , Anthony

 
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Posted by on April 11, 2011 in Uncategorized

 
 
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